Monday, May 12, 2014

The Cheat - Sarah final poem

Sarah and her final poem.

In the epilogue to end the book we never heard from Katie or Sarah upon Jakes anticipated return from saving the school from suspension for walking out and skipping school.  Write the poem Sarah wrote to describe the ordeal with Jake and his return to school and his new found game and acceptance. 

That Katie Tomatie
Peach of my eye
Most other potaties
Would not even try.
What a gal, what a pal.
So true and so blue.
That Katie , ma lady.
Oh thanka, thank you

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124 comments:

  1. The world has turned
    The walkout was spoiled
    The guilty is revealed
    I was back into the world
    Its all because of Jake
    the one who I wanted
    to wake
    He is Known
    he is blown
    he thought he would be stone
    but now he throned

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  3. That Jake Broder
    I don't know what has gotten in to him, he is so much hotter
    From a worm with no purpose
    To my hero on the surface
    Thank you for coming through at last
    Maybe one day we can look back and laugh
    You free monday after math?

    Written in the perspective of: Sarah Colgate

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    1. So DeAndre do you basically think sara thinks jake is now a someone ?? After all when sara came back she only gave jake a head nod

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    2. I think that head nod was just her keeping her image, but yeah I think that Sarah now thinks Jake is a someone. She's so going to chase him.

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    3. agree sara probably doesnt like jake in that way

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    4. why do you think that Deandre ?

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    5. Because he is now like her hero for letting her come back to school and all. Who knows anything is possible, but i think she is going to chase

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    6. I think Sara would like to think of jake

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    7. As a good friend, nothing more

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    8. Sarah won't chase him, Jake has a girlfriend. And after all of this attention that is being presented towards him, I strongly believe that Jake won't be interested in Sarah anymore.

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    9. But, Jake stole Sarah's spotlight! :o
      Maybe she'd get upset rather than chase after him?

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    10. DeAndre so you think that Sarah likes Jake after everything he put Sarah through? If it wasn't for Jake, Sarah wouldn't have to go through this. How can she be attracted to Jake, if he's the caused of this cheating scheme?

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    11. wait what jake has a girlfriend i only thought megan or someone just thought he was cute.

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    12. Abigail yes but if Sarah didn't give it out she probably wouldn't have gotten caught. Tamana Jake doesn't have a girlfriend the girl just thought he was cute and went after him so the possibility of Jake and Sarah could be a thing. Linda don't you think maybe they could be together and have all the attention if that's Sarah's goal?

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    13. Yeah but Deandre..
      if theres another girl thats interested in him, Jake would forget all about Sarah because he knows that he's got no chance. With the popularity leading the way, Jake will begin to think of Sarah as a nobody

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    14. no deandre, sara doesn't want to share the spotlight, she got stuck on having it herself so she became selfish

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    15. But if Sarah is interested in Jake wouldn't he go for it? I'm inferring/predicting Sarah will but chasing Jake and Jake will accept because in the beginning he had an obsession over her so don't you think those feelings would carry through? don't you think that he still likes her? Popularity leading his way yeah but that crowns Sarah second, which makes her most popular girl, wouldn't Jake want that?

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    16. Suhaib I don't think so because if she is thinking that selfish way she would want all the spotlight she can get so she would go after Jake.

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  4. Back at school in a flash , Felt like so much time has passed. Entered that school and saw so much new faces and I familiar one could i be mistaken ? Oh as i thought katie potatie and robby dobby did such good things for me but Jake what a mistake ratted himself out for me . Oh principle finally felt like he won again but no punishments for the ditcher's is what he got himself in . And here i am standing in school seeing this familiar face that suddenly rules . I cheat and got locked in a home all day but simply what you get is popularity . a girlfriend on your arm and new smiles in the hall but you see that isn't all ! Your hands are getting high fives and your name is being spread , you were a nobody when I left . Invisible face with the answer to a test. Now a popular face with a girlfriend . I say this because i mean it but not sure in which way thank you jake the mistake I shall never cheat again.

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  6. Colgate smile, my teeth gleaming
    I'm I awake?
    Maybe i'm still dreaming
    Jake you seized my throne in the school
    Where I sat and felt all cool
    I used to rule the school
    But now I feel like a fool
    I really do feel stripped of my awesomeness
    Troubling thoughts in the back of my consciousness
    You, I thought could trust
    But truth be told my hearts breaking like pizza crust
    In my fame you lust
    I'm too sad too cry out
    Unnumbered tears in undying drought

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    1. So you feel that Sarah is upset because Jake stole her popularity? I mean don't you think she is grateful that Jake saved her?

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    2. maybe not, what kid wouldn't take the chance of skipping school

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    3. Yes i think she is grateful but at the same time she isn't the center of attention no more

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    4. Yeah but you think she is upset about it?

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    5. Ya i wrote the poem from a sad/angered Sarah point of view

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  7. That jake guy
    From the corner of my eye
    I saw nothing of you but shy
    Now jake will rise
    From that fateful day
    You are a prize
    My guy

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  8. Wow! Jake, Jake Jake.
    Maybe it's a dream.
    Or maybe just all fake.
    Why is everyone treating him like he's cupcakes.
    Ugh! This is not fair, give me a break!

    He spoke the truth, but surprisingly he went far.
    Now everyone loves him, but hello! I'm the star!
    This is inconceivable.
    Wow Jake's famous, unbelievable!

    He never really shined.
    To me he was a different kind.
    It all changed, I now open my eyes.
    Because they seemed like they were blind.



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    1. So does this mean that Sarah finds him cool and awesome now?

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    2. so she thinks jake stole sarah's glory

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    3. i don't think that sarah likes jake, i just think jake just grew a spine and sarah just approves

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  9. Jake, as sweet as Cake
    Oh he was so brave
    Stepping on to what was his possible grave
    All just to save......
    me
    Oh Jake, how did you become so brave?
    When I left, I was forced to think you were a big mistake.
    Oh Jake, how you are sweet as cake

    Sarah Colgate Smile Coleir ^

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    1. Jake
      Maybe you really are as sweet as cake
      I mean you nearly fell into your ready made grave
      Oh how you were so brave
      You went through so much trouble all just to save
      Me
      Sarah Coleir
      I swear before I was vanished you were known as a mistake
      Oh Jake
      I used you as bait
      I'm Sorry
      Am I really
      Why worry?
      Look at you now!
      The kid who once was unknown
      Now has a girl
      Repeatedly gets praised
      No more high5s in the face
      Jake should be thanking me

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    2. why do you think jake should be thanking sarah and not vise versa

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    3. Your poem is good! But do you really think Jake should thank Sara ? it was Jakes choice to confess

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    4. what does sarah show more towards jake thankfulness or hatred?

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    5. Thinking this through, I personally don't think thehy really have to thank each other. But I feel like Sarah would think that Jake should thank her for that "fame" he gained.

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  10. Jake your fame is fake
    For goodness sake give me a break
    You give me a head ache, but thank you
    you where true blue, you where reliable like a gym shoe
    But your test was untrue, you really bit more than you could chew
    like the sauce ragu
    i hope your done with all this hullabaloo, And that you pull through
    A cow goes moo and with that i bid you adieu

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    1. I think this describes Sarah's opinion of Jake perfectly, honestly xD
      I love the use of the rhyme words and known phrases, i.e. "You bit more than you could chew."

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    2. I like the way this is written. The rhymes are wonderful!

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    3. So you also think that Sarah is very upset with Jake for stealing her popularity? don't you think she is grateful for his take on the event? Wonderfully written by the way.

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    4. thank you,
      i never stated that. though she is probably relieved that he took the rest of the blame.

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    5. Deandre Im sure she is very grateful but if Jake didn't confess she would still have majority of the school on her side é

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    6. Yes i think she is grateful but Jake stealing her fame is hateful. So wouldn't you feel distasteful?

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    7. If someone lame stole your fame?

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    8. Abdi Don`t you think Sara is to relived to even think about her popularity . But technically Sara still has her `fame``

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    9. But imagine if you were Sara and came to school the next day not feeling the same (SUPERCOOL), even for a day, wouldn't you feel even a little down?

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    10. I mean you Sara Colgate Ad Collier one day and then everything gets stripped from you

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  11. Epilogue- Sarah

    Suddenly, from the sky,
    a star begins to shine.
    Thanks to my potatie,
    the students start a rise!
    They risk many detentions,
    and maybe even suspensions,
    until Chen's phone rings,
    and a little birdie sings.

    "Oh Mr. Chen!" He cries,
    As Sir Principal heaves a large sigh.
    "I truly know who did it,
    don't say goodbye!
    But, in exchange for my knowledge,
    I must ask of you
    A single task-
    Make me a hero,
    who has taken off his mask!"

    And so after he pays,
    he hopes, he prays,
    He comes to school
    shining brighter than day
    and receiving nothing else but praise.

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    1. So Linda do you think that Sarah is jealous of Jake? Crushing on Jake? Is chilled with Jake? In other words how do you think Sarah feels about Jake?

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    2. I think she's cool with him. Not fawning over him, nor despising his guts. She feels thankful, but won't let it affect her entire opinion on "the worm turned hero"

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    3. Why do you think that Jake being popular won't change Sarah's opinion. Because it changed others, why not Sarah's?

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    4. abby maybe its because Sarah knows the whole story

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    5. It doesnt mean her opinion can't change. She thought that Jake was some type of coward because he was being a wimp by not telling the truth. Now Jake got her out of it, she can atleast make second thoughts.

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  13. Jake was a little to late
    to accept the treachory that made our worlds' quake.
    No one knew the truth but me
    oh what a unpredicted story this turned out to be.
    Jake was a nobody and lame at school
    I guess It was me who turned out to be the big fool.
    Sticks and stones may break my bones forgetting all the pain,
    but whatever would have happened; sealed my lips will remain.
    Silly Jake, turning himself in for me,
    it was my mistake to begin with, im no longer the colgate queen.
    What do my eyes see?
    Am I being decieved?
    I gotta be honest i'm a bit relieved.
    Jake's in the hallway and I feel my world fall,
    High-fives, "Way To Go!" and a sweet "Hello' from a girl 5 feet tall.
    She falls in his arms
    he has a new girlfriend I see.
    Now i'm sure that my eyes do not decieve me.
    Big crowds and girls all over
    This situation seems to be much more sober.
    Jake did this for me after I saved him,
    Wow Jake.. Your personality is what I have mistaken.
    I've learned something valuable Jake,
    Thank you for what you have done.
    Cheating is something I would never consider as fun.

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    1. Why do you think that Sarah is somewhat jealous of Jake? Even though Jake is popular now, It doesn't mean Sarah lost all of her attention.

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    2. I agree with Jake taking the popularity. Good one Tamana!

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  15. Hey Jake I thought you were fake
    I made a very big mistake,
    At first I never knew your name
    I though you were so lame
    But now you are starting to get some fame
    and I'm getting ashamed.
    Barely anyone knew you at this school,
    But Now look who's SUPERCOOL!
    You must be one courageous man to stand up for someone
    Thanks alot I owe you a ton!
    I tend to still be friends,
    I don't want this friendship to end.

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    1. So you think that Sarah is willing to let go of the fact that Jake had willingly allowed her to take his blame, and in the end stole her spotlight as the cool kid, and would now beg to be his friend?

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    2. They weren't friends in the first place

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    3. He did exactly steal her spotlight but he is getting more popular and more people respect him for what he did. The reason sarah wants to be his friend is because Jake didn't have to help her he could have ignored the fact that Sarah is in trouble and he could have moved on but he din't he actually hepled her through her tough times when no one was by her side.

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    4. Suhaib Sarah started to get to talk to Jake more after he gave her the paper and they were friends because otherwise if they wern't why did Sarah protect Jake so he won't get the blame?

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    5. Why would he be a fake though? At that moment, I would say Jake was to memorized by Sarah, therefore he would not be able to plan anything to make him seem fake.

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  16. Oh Jake, he maybe a friend,
    he finished this suspension,
    thank-god no bitter end,
    he took away all the tension,
    Now this Jake has more reputation,
    no one is now in this cheat frustration,
    he is out of the shell that he once made,
    finally this time he was not afraid,
    he is now awake,
    this almost seems fake,
    finally everything is good,
    this cheating is trouble, we all understood,
    Jake is now flying,
    he ain't crying,
    he's now so known,
    he is no more a quiet stone,
    an happy ending, with a twist though,
    Why'd he do this, I still don't know.

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    1. so what does sarah think about him know does he deserve the glory yes of no?

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    2. Why do you think Jake helped Sarah even though he knew he would get into this mess too?

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    3. do you think Sarah will pull by and want to be friends with him since he turned out to be so popular?

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    4. @ Rajveer- I think Sarah agrees with Jake deserving this glory, since he helped her out, if it wasn't for him, there was a chance of they students getting suspended, and Sarah not returning. So I think Sarah owns him a thank-you for helping her.

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    5. So do you think that Jake becoming all popular is also a happy ending for Sarah?

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    6. @ Gurvir- Jake didn't do this to help Sarah, instead he did this because he was jealous of so many students helping Sarah. But Sarah would probably think he did this to help her!
      @ Harpreet- I think even if Jake wasn't popular Sarah would still be friends with him, since he rated himself out.

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    7. @ Khushi- Yes it's also a happy ending for Sarah, because she knows it was hard for her to get back into school. Even though it's not true that Jake did this to help her, she probably thinks it is! So yes she should be happy with this ending.

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    8. yes I agree Srushti, he did what was right and he took the blame he deserved, it wouldn't be fair if Sarah took the whole entire blame to her self

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  17. A Nobody
    That's what I called him
    A Somebody
    That's is who he was all long
    When my lights turned off
    And everything was pitch black
    I was lost inside a dreadful cave
    I heard voices trying to pull me out
    I was getting closer, but I wasn't close enough
    I 've lost hope, I gave up, there's no use of trying to escape.
    And then there was light
    A bright light.
    If it wasn't for Jake, that ... somebody
    I would of been stuck in that cave forever
    Jake oh Jake
    Thank You, Thank You very much
    You rescued me and saved me from trouble
    I was wrong about you, your not a coward afterall.

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    1. I like you poem nice and descriptive wait so you disagree with the fact that you called him cowardliness right?

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    2. Do you think Sarah likes Jake now? There's a lot of debate about that.
      Or is she just thankful?

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    3. Harpreet: I still think that he was be a coward at first. Now he confessed which is what I excpect to happen in the beginning

      Tamana: I think she's just Thankful. How can she crush on Jake when he got her into the trouble in the first place?

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    4. yes he totally had to confess soon for this consequence to end

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  18. That smile nicer then the river Nile
    after we went to trail
    i gave her fakes
    now there so much at stake
    its giving me a head ache
    we thought it would be a peice of cake
    now look im in trouble
    and everything fell to rubble
    but i pulled back
    and i went on the attack
    after that it worked
    and now i have a big smirk
    My cover might been blown
    but now i own the throne


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    1. Im guessing this is from Jakes perspective?
      So you think Jake thinks hes all Big man .? Oh im the kin i own the thrown ?

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    2. Ah, so this is in Jake's perspective?
      Clever, clever. I like the last two sentences, as it's a memorable way to end off the poem.

      What made you want to write from Jake's POV?

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    3. what do think jake thinks of jake, i mean who used who?

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  19. Monday back to school
    I thought people will think that I am a fool.
    but they just stood there and were talking with there buddies
    the bell rang and that meant it was time for studies.
    I had Geography and that reminded me of Jake
    oh and here goes that head ache.
    Everything was back to normal
    and I felt abnormal.

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  20. A boy named Jake.
    Was out of shape.
    But wait.

    What had happened?
    Was unexpected.
    It was completely enchanted.
    It was a wish, granted.

    He became a jock.
    He was on etalk.
    And couldn’t be stopped.

    But Dan and rob forgave.
    Because what Jake did was brave.
    They knew that we all had mis-behaved.
    After what had happened I was amazed.

    Now he has the glory.
    After a confusing story.
    He was no longer a shorty.

    He saved mee.
    I owe you, which is a guarantee.
    Damn I hate siri.
    Now look at you Jake.
    You little snake.

    Now you have the fame.
    People think of you as a saint.

    Now we are back in school.
    I hope we don’t get ridicule

    now everyone looks at you with a new view.
    But for what you did thank you!

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    1. Why do you hate Siri? O.O

      Also, does this mean that she's upset at him, yet still thankful?
      Which does she feel more of?
      Gratitude, or anger?

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    2. Oh, wow this made me laugh, especially the Siri and etalk part, was pretty awesome!

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    3. well siri doesnt listen to me :'(
      i belive she is more thankful cause her entire career could have ended with a all year suspension.

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  21. Jake, the sheets still go through my head
    if only I had never read
    That fear led up to trouble
    from their the tension was double
    though my suspension had come to an end
    so school is now for me to attend
    If only these days were not to be real
    These moments would take time to heal
    I declare that I have cheated
    but only if this was defeated
    you now have moved on within this past
    I so need to get out of it really quick and fast
    still have this life to go through
    what may the future be, I have no clue,
    you sure are popular this way
    though I say, from the cheating I'll stay away
    Jake this sure has changed you
    you have now entered a world where you flew.
    Now I'm awake, he has a girlfriend
    oh WOW such a big, big trend








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    1. If Jake was popular and all, wouldn't Sarah want to "hang out" rather then shun him out?

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    2. well yes because she still has no clue why he ratted his own self out but some day she would probably want to hang out with him and be friends since his popularity has increased with his reputation just because of this whole entire situation.

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  22. your like a different person you have no clue
    I had nothing to do so I stayed up thinking about you
    It may not seem like it but trust me its true
    Asking you for the test was a mistake
    One that I'll never make
    It was just a mistake I hope you can forgive for god's sake!
    I'm sorry really sorry Jake

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    1. What is Sarah feeling sorry for in this poem?
      Accepting the offered answers?
      Getting him in trouble? Didn't he tattle on himself, oh-so-heroically?

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    2. you think that Sarah wants Jake to forgive her? Won't you think it be the other way around or maybe from both sides? do you think she didn't rat him out cause she liked him

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  23. I think he used me
    to get where he is.
    Popular and cool
    and stop the show biz.
    I walk in here
    expecting people to question me.
    Then others run there
    and confused what my eyes to see.
    From another point of view
    you could he was helping
    but he suddenly has a crew
    and he's not yelping.
    I could say I deserve this
    that he took away my light.
    But I'm more in a hiss
    and into a fight.
    But a fight? With Jake?
    More like Jake the scrawny rake.
    Like I said, I think he used me.
    To get where he is.
    Popular and cool
    a good plan to stop the show biz.

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    1. You think Jake used Sarah? I personally think Jake was to memorized by Sarah Colgate Smile Colier.

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    2. That's a really good poem from Sarah's perspective, but isn't she supposed to focus more on Jake getting her back in school, than Jake being popular? Like even Sarah knows there was chance of Jake being suspended for this.

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    3. How could Jake use Sara if he never knew the outcome of giving the test answers ?

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    4. You think when Jake gave her the test and he gave himself in it was all one big plan to get him popularity? Personally I don't believe that.

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    5. how did jake use sarah? more like sarah used jake or jake just fell for a chick?

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    6. In Sarah's eyes, it may have looked like later in the end, Jake might have used her.

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    7. Personally, I think the focus was to imagine and and see what it might have looked like from Sarah's perspective.

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    8. Later on at the end when Jake see's himself what happens to him, he wouldn't have known. But when Sarah see's herself what happens to him. It looks like Jake wanted Sarah's light in school.

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    9. In Sarah's perspective it looked like Jake wanted to call Mr.Chen to make sure the walk out doesn't happen,and that everyone is there to be around Jake and talk to him. In Sarah's view.

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  24. I could've said your name and set myself free,
    But I didn't, I kept the blame on me,
    I had attention, but still got in trouble,
    Gossip spread around and put me in a bubble,
    I became different in everyone's eyes,
    But I didn't know the truth, and I didn't want lies,
    I didn't know myself why I cheated,
    But at that time, I didn't think I'd be defeated,
    I didn't speak even though I was forced to,
    But after confessing, look at you,
    I thought you'd be suspended or you'd leave the school,
    But I was wrong now you're considered cool,
    You've got the support and you have the fame,
    But what did that do - put me to shame?
    At you or at me, at whom should I be mad?
    All I know, is that now I regret not listening to dad,
    My efforts on saving you, are they all a waste?
    'Cause I know there was no haste,
    It changed my whole life and I know it changed your's,
    But who knew that 1 sentence could make you one of the leaders?
    All I want you to know is that for me, Jake,
    This world you created, is no piece of cake!

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    1. so do you think that his popularity would change him to a whole new person out of the nerd world?

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    2. I agree! It does look like Jake stole Sarah's light at school now! Nice one!

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    1. I think he's dating Ashley now, not Brenda lol
      And do you think Jake regrets using Sarah as a shield in the end, or is he too caught up in his fame to care?

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  26. Jake he told the truth and he was never fake
    I just want to let you know I appreciate the risk you'd take
    I had a dessicion to make
    Ohh Jake Ohh Jake
    Is this a dream
    Or maybe its all fake
    I left you thinking cheating was a big mistake
    but came back and how did you become so brave
    Before i didn't even know your name
    because you were lame \but now look you are cool and have some fame
    I thought you were a fool
    but now you are super cool.

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  27. Jake, oh, Jake,
    The excuses you would make,
    Thank god that I had not told on you,
    Or else, where you'd be, we would have no clue,
    I will never forget what you did,
    Nor will I forget that you hid,
    What happened, I didn't know,
    But when I got to, I just said whoa,
    Thought you were cowardly and weird too,
    Just realizing, that this Jake is new,
    These are words that were stuck in my throat,
    But in front of what you did, this is just a mote,
    You were scared, and I would be too,
    Just wanna say, thank you,
    But your life is now on fire,
    I am just glad that your reputation now is higher,
    Because the one you had before was pretty low,
    Why you did this I still don't know,
    Not to cheat that I learned,
    A punishment was what I earned,
    And now I don't really care,
    As long as there is no more pain to bare.

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  28. Jake that boy
    he was no toy
    he was discovered just like troy
    they never noticed him in the class
    because he was clear as glass
    he called Chen and made a deal
    this time was strong as steel
    he took the blame and obeyed the rule
    suspended and out of school
    4 days banned from school comes back like no fool
    treated like a new guy
    popular like he's in the sky
    holding hands with that Ashley girl
    treating her like she's his pearl
    he's popular I've got to say
    while I'm in the corner like a price of clay
    he looked at he with that face I gave him a head nod
    that was all I could say
    Sunday I'm gonna meet my dad surely he'll be very glad
    happy that I wasn't suspended and school that I attended
    all I can say is I am no king
    cheating was a very bad thing

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  29. Jake my little plum cake
    You came out clean
    I wish this incident could have been unseen
    You and Ashley are a good couple
    but HEY! you got me in trouble
    You used me as a shield
    and sealed yourself away
    I have one rule, don't snitch
    but instead you take advantage of me
    and use me as a tool
    But anyway your popular
    I guess now your too cool for school,you fool

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  30. I opened the door,
    my eyes nearly dropped to the floor.
    Is that Jake with a girl?
    Why is she treating him like he's a pearl?

    People are talking to him
    Girls are even catching a glimpse
    These people actually say hi.
    Before it was more like a bye.

    He used to be a nobody..
    Now he's a somebody.
    I gave him this reputation
    but now it's an irritation.

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  31. You think it would irritate Sarah on how Jake is now?

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  32. Arvind first rap:
    The British called a war,
    They’d kill us they swore,
    We fought with peace,
    No help no police,
    They called hate,
    That was our fate,
    I tried a lot but no solution,
    They kept on calling us a bunch of pollution,
    I was jailed for years,
    Than a path appears,
    We changed our tomorrows,
    And cleared all the sorrows,
    There was no mystery,
    Couldn’t change the history,
    I was shot I was killed,
    Than my statue was built,
    Now I know I am dead,
    But there are futures ahead.



    Harpreet first rap:
    You should all know me,
    I might even be,
    who you look up to be,
    if you don't, it's okay, don't worry,
    here I go, I'll give you my life story.
    In 1919, I was only eight years old,
    my father ill and he had a cold.
    I was told he was dying
    So I started crying.
    When people tried to talk I wasn't replying
    So at the age of twelve
    I convinced myself
    to become religious like everyone else.
    I took my religious vows as a nun.
    In 1931.
    And started thinking about the long run.

    Arvind second rap:
    My efforts made a creation,
    We ended the frustration,
    I was the leader, I was the pride,
    When I died, my people cried,
    Me and my nation we share a relation,
    I am the one, I am the only inspiration,
    Now you are the one, the new generation,
    People look up to me, for the education,
    I was a Hindu, and the jain influenced me,
    We fought together and , now we are all free,
    I am mahatma Gandhi, and grateful to be.

    Harpreet second rap:
    I helped the orphans, and the poor.
    Never thought of anyone less or more.
    Which opened a brand new door.
    Not one, two, three or four.
    We went through all with peace not war.
    Which is why I won the Nobel price.
    But, it wasn't a surprise.
    After that, I was memorized.
    And then, I gave my good byes.
    Now you all know me, and heard my story.
    I am someone who you should be.
    I'm " MOTHER TERESA" can't you see.

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  33. Linda's
    I saved my entire nation.
    It took dedication.
    I represented my times generation.
    If it wasn't for me it would've never been clear,
    And now all these girls can overcome their fears.

    Because he is apart of me,
    I sneaked into the army.
    Didn't want him to die,
    felt so sorry

    I did took his place.
    His paths I traced.
    It was a huge risk,
    put smiles on his face

    I do love my dad,
    he cheers me when I'm sad.
    I saved his life.
    Don't you think I'm glad?

    I wasn't china's greatest,
    but because of my braveness,
    you should know I'm Mulan.
    And now I'm famous.


    William's
    I keep the world clean.
    you can me green machine.
    My name is David Suzuki,
    Environment friendly.

    I'm the earth's hero.
    It started from zero.
    I'm building the world's foundation.
    I got appreciation,
    for nature's creation.

    Look at all this pollutions
    We need a solution.
    Lets give the earth its proper restitution.
    so trow away your trash,
    get a blue box.
    Tell everyone recycling rocks.

    Spoke truth to this nation.
    Making new creations.
    I fix climate range,
    as well as make change.
    I should be appreciated.
    cause my heart...it's dedicated


    Linda's
    when those arrows came,
    I did ricocheted.
    And when they offended me,
    trust me I was okay.

    Through the blood,sweat and tears.
    I still remained fierce.
    I never gave up.
    There's no time to spare.

    I held my head high.
    For every mountain that I climbed,
    and every fight that i conquered,
    throughout the hard times.

    I'm the first Chinese princess.
    I'm not damsel in distress.
    In fact I'm a heroine I'm Mulan,
    and I never rest.


    William's
    The burning of coals,
    cutting of trees,
    toxic waste,
    flowing into seas.

    Ozone layer, fading away.
    There wont be any earth,
    for our children to play.

    I'm the motivation.
    To this generation.
    I care foe plants,
    and love the trees.
    So don't be afraid,
    to let the animals free.

    my rhymes are art.
    Green is the colour,
    of my loving heart.
    I always try hard,
    to save the earth.
    It was a big dream,
    from the start!





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  34. Ronnella's
    Hey you, was-sup?
    Do you remember me?
    I fought for my people,
    don't you see?

    Oh wait,
    I told you that and you all agreed.
    It was my main goal,
    and it did succeed.

    Tubman and I we did it for you.
    But Mulan and Suzuki about to drop it too.
    So do sit back because its about to start,
    and please don't forget that I'm Rosa Parks.

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