The picture that is most vivid and resonated with me was... The first one it instantly jogged my memory to the beginning of the book we're Sean Was sent to the vice principal's office.
Your pictures are great. However, in the last picture it looked like they were sleeping.To improve your picture you could have opened your eyes and looked as if you were in pain.
I think your photos are pretty good but I think that your photos did lack the use of blur. Also you used the same text for the second and third picture. Other than that I think you guys did a good job
honestly i think the pictures were put together really well and in the first picture it actually looks like ravi was injured, and by that i mean you guys did a great job with the cosmetics.
In my opinion you did an amazing job, although i believe you guys could've taken the last picture at a different angle, or not show much lack of emotion. But overall your pictures are great.
for me, In the first and last picture it looks like they were sleeping so in the first one I think ravee should've put two of his hands in his face to make him look sad and last picture you guys should have opened your eyes.But good editing tho.
The picture that is most vivid and resonated with me was... The first one it instantly jogged my memory to the beginning of the book we're Sean
ReplyDeleteWas sent to the vice principal's office.
Your pictures are great. However, in the last picture it looked like they were sleeping.To improve your picture you could have opened your eyes and looked as if you were in pain.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback we will improve it next time
DeleteI like the picture of the office seen but a tip would be look a bit mor sad and angry mixed
ReplyDeletethanks for the feedback we will know what to do next time.
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DeleteThe only feedback I'm could give is that in the first picture you look like your sleeping
ReplyDeleteKellisa thanks for the feedback we'll remember what to do next time.
DeleteJamelia, thanks for the feedback, now I have an reminder to take better pictures and get everything right
ReplyDeleteWe made him to close his eyes because he could think that we did he promise to his mom
ReplyDeleteI think your photos are pretty good but I think that your photos did lack the use of blur. Also you used the same text for the second and third picture. Other than that I think you guys did a good job
ReplyDeletethank you for the feedback.
Deletei say that you guys should of shown bj face on the picture two, and keep ravi eye half open so it will look more realistic
ReplyDeleteI will keep in mind of that for next time.
Deletehonestly i think the pictures were put together really well and in the first picture it actually looks like ravi was injured, and by that i mean you guys did a great job with the cosmetics.
ReplyDeletethanks for the feedback
DeleteThank you
Deletethank you for your feedback
DeleteIn my opinion you did an amazing job, although i believe you guys could've taken the last picture at a different angle, or not show much lack of emotion. But overall your pictures are great.
ReplyDeleteI agree with that.
Deletethanks for the feedback
ReplyDeletefor me, In the first and last picture it looks like they were sleeping so in the first one I think ravee should've put two of his hands in his face to make him look sad and last picture you guys should have opened your eyes.But good editing tho.
ReplyDeleteI will be sure to try and remember that
DeleteThanks saddat,I hope we could have improved earlier,but thanks again for the feedback
DeleteI Promised My Parents I wouldn't get in trouble is the pic i like best , its a perfect quote and the composition is well designed.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr Cheney
Deletethank you mr cheney that was the last pictures we took and the one you helped us with
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ReplyDeleteThank you Mr.cheney, that was our last picture before we had to come for French
ReplyDeletethe text overlaps to much and makes it look messy and unorganized. but over all nice pics
ReplyDeleteThank you Marcos, I keep that in mind for next time
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